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For the sake of my lack of internet, I needed to reply to all reviews via blog. I'm thinking it's easier to do this rather than individually responding due to time constraints.
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Edward is a good guy after all: he goes after his goddaughter because his divorcing friend & the child's father won't.
That's pretty damn good of Edward, even if he really doesn't know what he is doing. jansails/jan2
My reply
I've come across several stories that make Edward a dream in practically everything, some with reason and some with none. In this story, Edward has none and though he lacks in experience he's willing to at least try for Colette, godfather duties and all :)
Thanks for your review!
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I like this Edward.
My reply
Thanks!
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Emmett should be written with two T. :)
My reply
Thank you for the correction, I knew something looked a bit off about his name but I chalked it up to writing chapters either really late at night or really early in the morning...
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I really like the first chapter of this. But this chapter kinda ruined the story for me. I cannot believe that Bella PUNCHED someone because they didn't want to give a STRANGER the keys of their 100k car. WTH? No mentally sane person would do that. She is acting like a total psychopath. And it's really fucked up that violence against man is always seen as some justified, funny& or cute thing, just because man are physically stronger. If Edward had punched HER, we would never want to forgive him, no matter the circumstances. The double standard is appalling. What Bella did is fucked up on every level. IMO Edward should've called the police or just kicked her crazy ass out of his apartment.
Their whole issue about the car was weird anyway. Do CABS not exist in their city or...
My reply
Corrections done. But seriously, calm your tits. I'm not trying to make some kind of warped feminine statement about how a woman can hit a man but they can't hit back, it was done purely for humor which obviously went over your head. I'm not surprised though, physical violence is common for anime/manga of which I've been watching frequently. Won't happen again regardless.
As for the cabs, I honestly forgot about them, but they have been mentioned in the edit. I'm from South Africa and the closest thing to a "cab" they have here is a taxi which is something completely different and I wouldn't even want psychopathic Bella on it, it gets a bit weird for me to wrap my mind around American things because the only other story I've written for is Pride and Prejudice and surprise! No cabs.
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God update already
My reply
My life doesn't revolve around updating stories. The updates will come when they come.
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Fun story so far! ;-)
My reply
Thank you, glad you're enjoying it :)
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Can u pls post your update schedule. ..
My reply
Currently I'm just aiming to update once a week, possibly once every two weeks depending on how hectic college is. It's harder than I realized to be a regular updater since I finished high school so I can't promise anything.
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Amen, ice cream is a must.
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chapter 2 . Jul 28
He should totally opt to stay around for the latter. And, isn't she supposed to be behavin like a reasonably respectable adult? Lol! She's hilarious.
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chapter 1 . Jul 28
This is very different from the world of stolen kisses and compromises, lol. But I like your style, regardless of setting. Looking forward to reading more of this.
My reply
Wow, I've never had someone slightly late to the party review as much as you have, not only for this story but for Sibling Intervention too, colour me impressed :)
Hopefully the change in story setting won't throw you off as well as my apparently horrid portrayal of the characters xD
Thank you for all your reviews, I appreciate them immensely!
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